Friday, April 10, 2009

Broadcast Style Excercise

NORTHWEST AIRLINES ANNOUNCED TODAY THAT IT IS CUTTING IT'S DOMESTIC FARES BY UP TO 40-PERCENT FOR HOLIDAY TRAVELERS.


WITH THE DISCOUNTED, NON-REFUNDABLE FARES, A PASSENGER COULD TRAVEL ROUND-TRIP BETWEEN BOSTON AND SAN FRANCISCO FOR 400 DOLLARS ON CERTAIN DAYS.

C-E-O OF NORTHWEST AIRLINES FRANK DEWITT (DOO-WITT) SAID, "WE LIKE TO THINK OF IT AS A HOLIDAY GIFT TO OUR CUSTOMERS."

TICKETS MUST BE PURCHASED BY FRIDAY FOR TRAVEL BETWEEN NOVEMBER 12TH AND JANUARY 14TH IN THE LOWER 48 STATES, ALASKA, AND CANADA.

DISCOUNTS VARY DEPENDING ON TRAVEL DATES AND ARE NOT AVAILABLE ON CERTAIN POPULAR DAYS, INCLUDING NOVEMBER 23RD AND 26TH, DECEMBER 23RD AND 26TH.

1 comment:

  1. 13.5/15

    Don't add "th" and "rd" to dates.
    Paraphrase the quote.
    500-DOLLARS (hyphenate)

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