A Springfield man suffered third-degree burns 3 p.m. yesterday and is now in intensive care after he touched a power line carrying 15,000 volts while installing new pipes on the roof of the Springfield Municipal Power Plant, at 222 Power Dr.
Fact Set #2: Car accident
Two Springfield men were involved in a two car accident when one driver crossed the center lane and struck the other vehicle as it was heading southbound on U.S. 63 at 11:45 Saturday morning sending the driver to the hospital.
1a: Tighten up our first lead: Pipefitter Duane La Chance suffered third-degree burns Wednesday afternoon while installing new pipes... We don't need to know who is employer is in the lead. That can come in P2.
ReplyDelete1b: Good, but tighten it up a bit more. ...after he touched a 15,000-volts power line...
2a: Just ID the injured guy in the lead. Getting both of their names in there makes for a bulky lead.
2b: Start with the injured guy -- that's what makes it news. Otherwise, it could just be a fender-bender.
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